Tips For Crafting Short Fiction

If you want to hone your skills in writing novels or other forms of long fiction, writing short stories is a perfect way to start.

Why?

Short stories are a smaller piece of the pie that will be easier to swallow. Condensing a story into 3000-5000 words will reveal many loopholes you will likely face when writing a novel or lengthy fiction.

Imagine finding knotty plotlines, thousand clichés, or a million filler words in a short story; think of how profound these errors will be in long fiction. Writing a short story is about a story well told in a concise manner.

If you look around, there are story ideas everywhere; you can learn to identify a good story idea and write it briefly – that way, you are building up your skills and mastering the element of storytelling.

Once you keep at it, you will soon become a good fiction writer and possibly start writing your novel. If you are still trying to get a grasp on how to write short stories, here are some helpful ten tips:

1. Begin as close to the end as possible: Introduce the story’s plot as soon as possible. This will help the reader decide if to proceed with reading the story or not. Polish your opening lines and paragraphs to ensure that your readers’ interests are drawn into the story immediately and sustained till the end. To hook the reader’s attention right away, bypass the ‘before’, ‘the related’, as well as the vaguely interesting details of the character’s life and go straight to the meat of the story.

2. Keep up with the pace: Pace is vital in short fiction. The pace usually increases as the protagonist approaches the final conflict. Because short fiction begins close to the last conflict, it has to hit the ground running and shoot the reader straight into the action from the first page.

3. Trim down the number of characters: Developing a large number of characters is quite difficult for short fiction, and it also becomes very difficult for the reader to keep track of them.

Normally, a short fiction needs basically three characters, i.e. the protagonist, the deuteragonist, and the tritagonist. Provide someone for your reader to love and cheer on, someone to hate, and sometimes, someone who advances the character arc for either the protagonist or deuteragonist.  

4. Give your reader a character to root for: Just like the characters in a novel, a short fiction needs a hero – someone your reader will love and feel a connection with. Give your lead character a passion and a determination that will push them out of their comfort zone. Give your character a weakness that your reader can relate with. Look at your character’s psyche and make them real and more humane. To learn more about how to create a compelling character, check out  How To Create The Perfect Villain For Your Story.

5. Create conflict: As a rule, every short fiction must have a single point of conflict. A good dose of tension should be infused into the conflict to keep your readers engaged. Your lead characters should have a revelation, dilemma, or experience a bad omen in your short fiction to make your story attention-grabbing.

6. Appeal to the five senses: Do not confine yourself to only the visual experience of your story. Let your readers touch, smell, taste, and hear your story. Let your readers explore the full breadth of your world as if they share it with you. For instance:

The smell of bread from the bakery woke him from his sleep

7. Suggest a backstory but make it brief: You have limited time to script your character’s backstory but work it out in your head so it can guide you in deciding your character’s motivation as you write. In addition, it will help you point out the reasons for their actions and goals in the story.

8. Use dialogue to bring your story to life: Good dialogue makes your characters lively, bringing your story to life. When assigning characters to a scene, give them something to do; they can cook or take a walk but use dialogue to enhance your story and set the conflict. Do not invest too much time setting up scenes because you do not have the luxury of an extended plot.

9. Edit till you feel bad: After writing good fiction, you just have to trim it to make it as concise as possible. But ensure you do not remove the core of the story. In editing your short fiction story, you can use the following as a guide:

  • Eliminate transitory scenes and get straight to the nitty-gritty of the story
  • Delete repetitive words
  • Combine characters if possible
  • Remove unnecessary adverbs and adjectives
  • Ensure all sentences count

I know as a fiction writer with many scenes and amazing characters running through your head, it is difficult to eliminate them from your story. But because the conventional rule for short fiction is to keep it short and simple, endeavour to do so as much as you can. To take the burden of writing your fiction stories off you, check here.

Writer’s Burnout – What It Is And How To Overcome It

Let’s assume you have a new writing project on a subject you’re interested in. You may even have had a series of debates on with your friends, so you are apt with ideas, facts, and all the data you need to execute the project.

 To make it more profound, you have just churned out an impeccable piece a few days back, and you are certain that you’ll relish the new project experience, so you are anxiously waiting to kick it off.

Sadly, as the D day approaches, you postpone with an assurance of commencing on a new date, but as the new date approaches, you lack the energy to open your writing pad. Instead, you feel tired and stressed – you’re experiencing writer’s burnout, not block.

Writer’s burnout is different from writer’s block. Writer’s block is a writer’s inability to churn out words on the blank space before him. Writer’s burnout does not necessarily affect a writer’s ideas of what to write; it attacks his energy and impedes his productivity. 

This happens when you are stressed or overworked for a long period. There are times when work takes its toll on you and affects your ability to deliver your deliverables. Burnout is the exhaustion that comes after a stretch of hard work, irrespective of your profession; it doesn’t diminish your credibility.

However, a writer does not only experience burnout from actually writing alone. Other writing activities, like reviewing a project repeatedly, rewriting a previous work many times, editing different manuscripts, the stress of publishing a manuscript, and the stress of sourcing a viable platform or distribution channels for our work can trigger writer’s burnout.

Signs of Writer’s Burnout

Writer’s burnout is easy to confuse with writer’s block, and so many writers treat writer’s block when they are experiencing burnout. Before answering the question, ‘am I experiencing writer’s burnout?’ you need to understand the signs and symptoms. Some of the signs include:

Depression: Being depressed while doing your job as a writer is a pointer to the fact that you have hit your burnout.

Unfulfillment: There is a liberating experience a writer relishes each time he completes a project. He looks forward to the next one with excitement, but once this feeling is eroded, burnout is gradually taking its toll.

Lack of Interest: Writing is a gratifying experience for a writer; hence every new project is embraced, especially when it’s your genre or an intriguing subject matter. When there is no interest in projects across board, you are suffering from writer’s burnout.

Fatigue: There is no cause for alarm when you feel tired after a hectic day. But when tiredness and exhaustion spill into each passing day and make you unable to do your job, or you feel tired without a clear reason, you need to check it.

Procrastination: Rescheduling a job for a later date is not bad, but when you continuously alter the date without a plausible reason, you’re having burnout.

Lack of Commitment: In this case, you feel unconcerned about your deadlines. You don’t care if you meet up with it or not.

Why Writer’s Burnout Happens

It’s good to have lots of projects on your desk that keep you busy at a very fast pace, but if you don’t slow down, you may experience burnout. Even if you are not overloaded with work, other reasons could cause you to experience writer’s burnout, and some of them are:

High Expectations: In the creative space, you are as good as in your last job. So oftentimes, new projects are usually in competition with the previous projects. When the expectation becomes overwhelming, it can lead to burnout.

Negative Feedback: When a writer’s work is met with constant criticism, it can trigger burnout.

Setting Unrealistic Targets: Even though it is commendable to be goal-oriented, the writing space is a creative space, and as a result, the propelling force the writer needs may not always be under his control. When a writer’s goal is not met, it can cause burnout in the writer.

Absence of Support: A writer saddled with other pressing responsibilities, like child care and its overwhelming demands, without moral, psychological, or financial support can suffer burnout.

Lack of Sleep: Sleep is very important in everyone’s life, including writers. Not getting adequate sleep can cause a writer to burn out.

Stress: Like all other professionals, a stressed writer can develop a subconscious dislike for his job.

Excess Workload: Sitting on numerous projects can trigger a writer’s burnout over time, especially when you have tight delivery dates. Another twist is when a writer writes, edits, proofreads, and does the publishing himself.

How To Overcome Writer’s Burnout

Writer’s burnout is not permanent; you can overcome it with the right approach. Here are some helpful tips:

1. Take a Break: Based on the popular axiom that all work without play makes Jack a dull boy, you can walk off the writing space for a short period and explore other creative mediums. You can go on a vacation, picnic, take swimming lessons, visit the cinema, go on a fishing expedition, etc. This will help you rejuvenate and come back refreshed. Even while working, you can treat yourself to some mini breaks – meditate, relax, or simply take a walk.

2. Have Enough Sleep: Sleep is the most potent remedy for stress. It costs nothing; it’s just for you to tweak your to-do- list and allot extended hours to your sleep. No matter the effort you put in to remedy your burnout, if you are not getting enough sleep, it is a futile effort.

3. Get a Hobby: Your hobby is your escape route from professional stress. However, some writers started writing for fun but now write to make a living, thereby losing the fun aspect of the craft due to tight deadlines. If you fall into this category, find a new hobby and seek the slightest opportunity to savour it.

4. Learn to Turn Down: We are usually scared of turning down some jobs because we do not want to bruise the client’s ego, but this can be detrimental to your competence. When the projects on your desk are overwhelming, take a break from new projects and focus on clearing your slate. Do not bite more than you can chew.

5. Spend Time With Your Loved Ones: There are people who light up our mood anytime, any day. Find time to savour memorable moments with them. Ensure they are the types that support your goals, ready to give you a listening ear and offer a helping hand.

Irrespective of your work, learn to balance your professional and personal life. Create time to spend with your loved ones; that would make life easier and even help you produce quality content.

Let’s know if you’ve ever experienced burnout and what you did to overcome it.

Difference Between A Regular Comma And An Oxford Comma

The act of writing is almost incomplete without a good infusion of commas, as commas play an integral part in the writing process. But as commonplace as commas might be to every English language user, there is a clear variation in types when it comes to their usage. Based on this variation, we will be looking at the major types of commas and their applications in sentences.

Before we prod further, let us have a clearer understanding of the general functions of commas in our writing exercises.

WHAT IS A COMMA? A comma is a punctuation mark used to mark divisions or breaks in sentences.

Commas serve as an infusion of air in a sentence; thus, whenever a reader sees a comma, it occurs to the reader that he or she needs to halt and take a breath before proceeding. To this end, we can say that commas make reading less cumbersome and aid the sequential flow of a sentence.

However, the role of commas in writing is beyond the division of letters alone. Imagine reading outrageous figures without a breaker, or a long sentence without a break. When writing large numbers, we break them into three digits to make it easier to read.

Having established the fundamental functions of commas, let’s now go into the meat of this article, which is the difference between an oxford comma and a regular comma.

WHAT IS OXFORD COMMA? An Oxford comma is a comma that comes before the last conjunction in a sentence. It is also known as a series or serial comma. But most times, it is called the Oxford comma because it has been used by Oxford university press – the publishing arm of the renowned British University as far back as 1905. Interestingly, the oxford comma is sometimes referred to as the Harvard comma because it is commonly used by Harvard University Press as well.

It is believed in some quarters to be used because of its stylish feature. However, some writers argue that the Oxford comma is not just used for its stylistic feature but that it also enhances clarity in writing. Therefore, the essential meaning of a sentence can be altered if the Oxford comma is not inputted.

Oxford comma is important for eliminating potential ambiguity, which can tamper with the elegance and clarity of writing. For example:

I sent flowers to my daughters, Chidimma and Folakemi.

The presence of the Oxford comma in the above sentence makes it easier for the reader to understand that I sent flowers to my daughters and two other persons named Chidimma and Folakemi.

 It is for this reason that some writers opine that the Oxford commas make writing more intentional and precise.

Oxford comma also aids clarity when a list consists of complex clauses or terms. For example:

Buy bread and beans cake, mango juice and smoothie, and my mint sweets.

One can notice that without the oxford commas in the sentence, it will be difficult for the reader to understand the above sentence because there are other conjunctions grouping the pairs of things that belong together as single items on the list.

THE REGULAR COMMA: a regular comma is a punctuation mark that indicates the divisions in a particular sentence.

This comma is used to separate clauses, phrases, or words that require a little pause. The regular comma offers more grammatical function and orders the sequential flow of the various components in a sentence. In using a regular comma to separate clauses, the writer must first establish if the clause is dependent or independent.

 For example: After sweeping the room, I washed my clothes.

Instead of: I washed my clothes after I swept the room.

If it is a relative clause, a regular comma suffices if it is non-restrictive. For example:

 I cut down all the almond trees, which were over 8 feet tall.

Instead of: Only the almond trees which were over 8 feet tall were cut down.

More so, a regular comma is used to separate two parts of a sentence. Especially when the second part of the sentence is an independent clause, i.e., a clause that can stand on its own. For example:

Olumide drove to work, but he was unable to drive home.

Note that when the second independent clause is too short, the comma can be omitted. For example:

Stand up and walk out.

A regular comma between clauses also alters the connotation of a sentence. For example:

 We drove around town on a cool day that was refreshing.

 We drove around town, on a cool day,  that was refreshing.

Regular commas are also used to insert parenthetical words and phrases in a sentence.

Suffice to say when it comes to the key indicators of the differences in the two types of commas, the oxford comma is oftentimes seen as a matter of the writer’s preference in style. However, there is no denial of the fact that the two types of commas play significant roles in enhancing the clarity of our writing and making reading our work less choking.

If you found this helpful, check out our other blog post on the comma. (click here)

Nine Things That Kill Writing

Writing can be a very tedious process. From the moment of researching to gathering suitable materials to sitting down for long hours with your writing pad to bleed alphabets, it saps a whole lot of energy from you. However, as painstaking as the process may be, how will you feel when all your efforts and sacrifices end up in the dustbin? Well, this is the reality of some writers. After piecing together beautiful ideas, some oversight can become a drawback to the success of your writing. This article will address some of those issues that impede the envisaged result of your writing projects. Some of those red flags are:

1. Use of too many adverbs and adjectives: another spoiler of your writing can be your unnecessary usage of adjectives and adverbs. Overusing these two parts of speech can tamper with your work’s grammaticality and make it difficult to comprehend. Words like suddenly, unknowingly, sadly, etc., should not be overused in your writing.

2. Subject-verb agreement flaws: to have a good writing, the subject and the verb in your sentences must agree with one another in number. If the subject of a sentence is plural, the verb must also be plural. If the subject is singular, the verb must also be singular. For example:

Incorrect: An important part of my academic success have been the teachers who taught me.

Correct: An important part of my academic success has been the teachers who taught me.

3. Omission of comma after an introductory element: infuse a comma after an introductory word, clause or phrase. This gives your reader a slight break, thereby injecting air into your writing to avoid confusion. For example:

Incorrect: In case you don’t know I am the founder of the company.

Correct: In case you don’t know, I am the founder of the company.

4. Lack of character motivation: this can pose a serious problem to many writers when considering the characters to use in your story. Define the role your characters are playing properly. Identify their aim, how they intend to achieve it, and the obstacles they will encounter. However, to make your writing more compelling, you may have to go deeper by providing a background or rationale behind his motive. For example, if you are writing a story about a studious student in a class, you can depict an instance of a student being embarrassed by his siblings for poor performance in an examination or a promise of a vacation abroad as the rationale behind his knack for reading.

5. Absence of a comma in a compound sentence: a comma is used to distinguish two or more independent clauses in a compound sentence separated by a conjunction. The comma usually comes after the first clause before the coordinating conjunction divides the clauses. For example:

Incorrect: Godsent jumped into a red truck and he drove away before being noticed.

Correct: Godsent jumped into a red truck, and he drove away before being noticed.

6. Putting more attention on word count: a lot of writers are guilty of this. Even though it is important you hit the expected word count of a project, it is wrong to water down the quality of your work with noise in a bid to meet your word count. Noise is anything that obstructs the flow of communication, and that includes filler words. It is better to convey the right message in lesser words than to confuse your reader with more words. Always choose quality over quantity when writing.

7. Inconsistent writing: the best way to master a skill is by doing it consistently, and writing is not an exception. You cannot write once in a blue moon and expect to be a master of the craft. Writing regularly also creates a bond between you and your reader. It makes you relatively part of their life. Furthermore, writing consistently can boost your competence and credibility as a writer.

8. Not having a niche: Avoid being like the proverbial Jack of all trades but master of none. As a writer, you are responsible for defining your speciality or beat and building on it. Do not jump on every genre of writing because it will make you play on the periphery of most but the main league of none. Know the broad category of issues that interest you and anchor your writing on a genre. Another plus to this is that you will gradually establish yourself as an authority in the space, thereby becoming one of the most sought-after writers in the space.

9. Absence of a compelling headline or title: your title is the signpost that leads your reader to the content of your work. Once you have a writing task, consider a suitable title or caption that will attract your reader to your work at a glance. To gain more insight on how to write a compelling headline or title, you can visit (visit where?). Consider your project as a meal you are preparing. Before one gets to taste your food, the aroma and the sight of the meal on the plate should whet the person’s appetite.

While some people find writing as an escape from their daily struggles, some have resorted to it as their source of livelihood. But whatever side of the divide you belong to, it is pertinent you pay attention to these minor details in your writing because, as minute as they may seem, they can erode your competence as a writer over time.

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How To Write A Movie Review

As a writer, you can be contacted to write a review on a blockbuster or a flop. As such, the onus is on you to hone your ability to think critically and watch movies beyond the conventional it was a great movie or a flop mindset.

Writing a movie review requires you to watch the movie more than once. This is because you are not watching the movie to relish it; rather, you’re watching with the aim of taking cognisance of every act, scene, dialogue, and monologue to help you write a review. Therefore, it is advisable to watch the movie with a notepad so you can take note of every detail and observation. However, here are some tips you can use to write a good movie review:

Begin with a compelling detail or opinion about the movie: this serves as the premise of your review. The idea is to grab your reader’s attention immediately. Your intro has to give the reader a feel of the movie. For example:

‘Despite a cracking soundtrack and an inspiring performance by Olumide, Late Last Night never gets past its weak plot and poor dramatic personae’.

‘Despite a growing agitation for same-sex marriage, not everyone understands its effects on our societal values like the characters of Flip Gender’.

Express your opinions and back up your criticism: some readers will rely on your review to decide if they should go ahead and watch the movie or save their precious time and money, so endeavour to give your thoughts and observations in your review. State why you are criticising an element in the movie and support your critique with valid facts. For example:

‘Flip Gender is a great movie that clearly mirrors the effects of same-sex marriage on our societal values. The characters, costumes, settings, and scenes made the movie worth viewing over and over again’.

‘It doesn’t matter how much you love politics, with Elections Day, you will be better off if you save your precious time and money doing something worthwhile’.

Create a thesis based on your findings: after thoroughly going through the movie, identify the unique insights you intend to bring to the fore. Come up with a central message or idea you want to highlight, and support it with some elements in the movie. This will move your review beyond a summary to film criticism. You can consider the following question to form the basis of the thesis for your review:

  • Does the movie portray or depict a contemporary issue? Is it the producer’s way of engaging in a wider conversation about an issue in public debate? Relate the film to a real-life situation.
  • Does the movie have a central message, or is the producer trying to wipe out public sentiment? Highlight if the movie has hit or missed its mark on either side of the divide.
  • Does the movie connect with you or the audience on a personal level or not? You can write your review based on your feelings or perception of the film. You can also infuse some personal experience into the review to make it more interesting to read.

Be concerned about your audience: consider who you are writing the review for. If it’s a third-party writing, create a balance between pleasing your client and your client’s audience. At Sabi Writers, we ensure we balance both. We take into consideration who our client’s audience is;  is it a national daily, box office, teen magazine, or fan site? Ensure your writing style and language is suitable for who you are writing for. Knowing your audience will help you determine the elements you should highlight in the movie.

Be armed with the cast portfolio: some people will watch a movie just because their favourite actor is featured in it. Spend a considerable time highlighting the performance of a veteran taking up a new role, the good performance of a rising star, and the brilliant performance of the cast despite a wishy-washy script. Spend a little time talking about the performance of the lead actors and whether they were able to do justice to their assigned roles or not. Commend the casts where they did well, mention where they were below par, and recommend how they could have done better.

Throw the spotlight on the directors, special effects, cinematographers, etc.: let your readers know the superb performance as well as the flaws of the directors, costume designers, makeup artists, cinematographers, etc. Highlight what they did well, where they astounded the audience, as well as where they disappointed the audience etc.

Avoid spoilers: as you are writing your movie review, remember that you are writing to propel people to watch the movie and not to ruin it. Give your readers an insight into the movie plot and strive to make a case for them to watch the movie.

Study other professionals: the importance of reading cannot be overemphasised in a writer’s life. Read other film reviews and observe what the reviewer did that you like and what you don’t like. Look for a leaf you can borrow from the reviewer and avoid the red flags you found. Read the publications you want your review to be published to serve as a template for writing your review.

Read and edit your work: your views on a movie will not be taken seriously if the cast names are not well-spelt. Ensure that actors’ names and the various locations you captured in your review are well-spelt. Check your work for grammatical and mechanical accuracy, and ensure your review is not devoid of organisational flow.

Hone your voice: every writer has a distinct and unique way of writing. However, finding your voice in writing does not happen overnight. So be deliberate about developing your own voice and style that will become the signature of your craft and keep your reader returning to your page.

A professional writer is expected to have a critical mind, so next time you watch a movie, be conscious of every element in the film and factor how you can critically analyse it for readers through your review.

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